The following are examples of the structure of Renga. They are not absolutes,
or invariable. All of them have been varied at some time or the other, but they
include most of the "rules". I had started to do my own notes on them, but then
found the three 36 link versions on Jane Reichhold's web site, they *are*
copyrighted by her, with permission to copy and share. My thanks to her for
saving me a massive amount of time and doing a great service to us all by
publishing them. Her web site is a treasure trove, and is a must visit if you're
interested in Japanese forms. (http://www.faximum.com/aha!poetry/)
I strongly advise you to stay with these guidelines until you have developed
your own understanding of Renga, what you can do with them, and your individual
feeling for them. There be dragons for the unwary.
If you don't know much about Renga, there is a link on the cage unhitched to an
introductory file on them that I suggest you read in conjunction with these
outlines. Also, there are links to a other introductory files on Tanka, from which Renga evolved some 8OO years ago in Japan.
And on Haiku too.
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This is the form for doing a traditional winter kasen renga.
[title - often taken from the first link]
[Between: authors' names]
[Add your links with the proper number of lines as shown in brackets.
Seasons and subjects. W = winter; Sp = spring; Su = summer; A = autumn; N =
non-seasonal; L = love verse.]
1. [3] W
2. [2] W
3. [3] N (Should end with a verb)
4. [2] N
5. [3] MOON / A
6.[2] A (You must also write #7)
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7. [3] A
8. [2] N/L
9. [3] N/L
10. [2] N/L
11. [3] N
12. [2] N
13. [3] SUMMER MOON
14. [2] SU
15. [3] N
16. [2] N
17. [3] FLOWER/SP
18. [2] SP (You should also write #19)
***
19. [3] SP
20. [2] N
21. [3] N
22. [2] N
23. [3] W
24. [2] W
25 [3] N/L
26 [2] N/L
27. [3] N/L
28. [2] N
29. [3] MOON/A
30. [2] A (You should also write #31)
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31. [3] A
32. [2] N
33. [3] N
34. [2] N/SP
35. [3] FLOWER/SP
36. [2] SP
ageku
closure
Started:
Finished:
Form designed and shared by Jane Reichhold, 1996.
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Form for a traditional spring Kasen renga
[title - often taken from the first verse.]
[Between: authors' names]
[SP=spring; SU=summer; A=autumn; W=winter; N=non-seasonal or relating to persons
A few basis rules to remember. Avoid repeating a noun or verb in the work.
Switch subject matter so there are not too many
verses on food or water, etc. Link ONLY to the verse above and not to any other.
Use the words "insects" and "dreams"
only once in a poem and never use the word "woman" (?!?). I'm not making this
up. Sign your link, please.]
1. [3] SP
2. [2] SP
3. [3] SP
4. [2] N
5. [3] MOON/A
6. [2] A must also write the next link
7. [3] A
8. [2] N/LOVE
9. [3] N/LOVE
10. [2] N/LOVE
11. [3] N
12.[2] N
13. [3] MOON/SU
14. [2] SU
15. [3] SU
16. [2] N
17. [3] FLOWER/SP
18. [2] also write #19
19. [3] SP
20. [2] N
21. [3] N
22. [2] N
23. [3] W
24. [2] W
25. [3] N/LOVE
26. [2] N/LOVE
27. [3] N/LOVE
28. [2] N
29. [3] MOON/A
30. [2] A also write #31
31. [3] A
32. [2] N
33. [3] N
34. [2] N
35. [3] FLOWER/SP
36. [2] SP should relate to #1 in some way and close the work
Date started:
Date finished:
Form designed and shared by Jane Reichhold, 1996.
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Kasen Renga Form Summer
[Your Title - often taken from the hokku]
A Traditional Summer Kasen Renga
Started - Finished:
Written by / between:
[SU = summer; A = autumn; W = winter; SP = spring; Misc. = non-seasonal
references - usually about people or feelings
or places; Love = well you can decide... Moons are always autumn unless you name
it a summer or winter or spring moon]
1.[3]
[SU]
________________________________________________________________________
2.[2]
[SU]
________________________________________________________________________
3.[3]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
4.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
5.[3]
[MOON / A]
________________________________________________________________________
6.[2]
[A]
[also write
link #7]
7.[3]
[A]
________________________________________________________________________
8.[2]
[Misc. / Love]
________________________________________________________________________
9.[3]
[Misc. / Love]
________________________________________________________________________
10.[2]
[Misc. / Love]
________________________________________________________________________
11.[3]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
12.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
13.[3]
[MOON / W]
________________________________________________________________________
14.[2]
[W]
________________________________________________________________________
15.[3]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
16.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
17.[3]
[FLOWER / SP]
________________________________________________________________________
18.[2] [SP]
[also write
link #19]
19.[3]
[SP]
________________________________________________________________________
20.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
21.[3]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
22.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
23.[3]
[SU]
________________________________________________________________________
24.[2]
[SU]
________________________________________________________________________
25.[3]
[Misc. / Love]
________________________________________________________________________
26.[2]
[Misc./ Love]
________________________________________________________________________
27.[3]
[Misc./ Love]
________________________________________________________________________
28.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
29.[3]
[MOON / A]
________________________________________________________________________
30.[2] [A]
[also write
link #31]
31.[3]
[A]
________________________________________________________________________
32.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
33.[3]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
34.[2]
[Misc. / SP]
________________________________________________________________________
35.[3]
[FLOWER / SP]
________________________________________________________________________
36.[2]
[SP]
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Copyright © Jane Reichhold 1994.
Permission to copy given.
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Kasen Renga Form - Autumn
[Your Title -- often taken from the hokku]
A Traditional Autumn Kasen Renga
Started - Finished:
Written by / between:
[SU = summer; A = autumn; W = winter; SP = spring;
Misc. = non-seasonal references -- usually about people or feelings or places;
Love = well you can decide... Moons are always autumn unless you name it a
summer or winter or spring moon.
SU/W = have a run of either summer or winter verses; not mixed.]
1.[3]
[A]
________________________________________________________________________
2.[2]
[MOON]
________________________________________________________________________
3.[3]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
4.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
5.[3]
[W]
________________________________________________________________________
6.[2]
[W]
[also write
link #7]
7.[3]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
8.[2]
[Misc. / Love]
________________________________________________________________________
9.[3]
[Misc. / Love]
________________________________________________________________________
10.[2]
[Misc. / Love]
________________________________________________________________________
11.[3]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
12.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
13.[3]
[MOON SU / W]
________________________________________________________________________
14.[2]
[SU/W]
________________________________________________________________________
15.[3]
[SU/W]
________________________________________________________________________
16.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
17.[3]
[FLOWER / SP]
________________________________________________________________________
18.[2] [SP]
[also write
link #19]
19.[3]
[SP]
________________________________________________________________________
20.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
21.[3]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
22.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
23.[3]
[SU/W]
________________________________________________________________________
24.[2]
[SU/W]
________________________________________________________________________
25.[3]
[Misc. / Love]
________________________________________________________________________
26.[2]
[Misc./ Love]
________________________________________________________________________
27.[3]
[Misc./ Love]
________________________________________________________________________
28.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
29.[3]
[MOON / A]
________________________________________________________________________
30.[2] [A]
[also write
link #31]
31.[3]
[A]
________________________________________________________________________
32.[2]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
33.[3]
[Misc.]
________________________________________________________________________
34.[2]
[Misc. / SP]
________________________________________________________________________
35.[3]
[FLOWER / SP]
________________________________________________________________________
36.[2]
[SP]
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Copyright © Jane Reichhold 1994.
Permission to copy given.
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Guidelines for the 20 link Renga:
The hokku is 5-7-5, the next link 7-7, and so on.
Abbreviations used:
Sum=Summer, Aut=Autumn, Win=Winter, Spr=Spring, Free=free(anything goes) Ch/Bl=
Cherry Blossoms
1. Sum
2. Aut
3. Moon
4. Aut
5. Free
6. Free
7. Win
8. Win
9. Free
10. Spr
11. Love
12. Spr
13. Free
14. Free
15. Sum
16. Aut
17. Aut
18. Free
19. Ch/Bl
20. Spr